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Decent..

This song is pretty good.
But I find the synths a bit too repetive. Maybe you'd like to use different melodies, and maybe fade synths in and out.
Also, I notice you are using a really common chord progression. If you use it, try to make a good melody to go with it, rather than basing your melody on that progression.
Also, adding some drums would be nice. =) Especially since you call this a 'dance drum.' Try giving this a 4 on 4 kick. It'll sound nicer. And add some bass too.

This is a pretty decent song to me, I look forward to seeing your other songs.

djresset responds:

thanks for your onesty
sorry bad englich

Great..

I like this song... Its quite awesome.
I just find that this isn't exactly my style of music, but I shouldn't let my preferences get in the way =)
This would make a great background music while doing something like... relaxing..?

KKSlider60 responds:

Well, that was the purpose. xD
Thanks for your review,
KKS

Awesome!!!!

Um... did you just got zero'd?

3.88 / 5.00 (+ 0.083)
13 votes
81 listens
7 downloads

Seems like a really low score to me... Doesn't seem to deserve such a score.

Great song! Like your style of music. =)

Great!

This song is pretty good, but I can tell the melodies are repeating a bit too much.
Also, this isn't really long enough to be a song. Its more of a loop, if you can make it do so.
Also, I find the synths a bit piercing to the ears, its a bit too high pitch.
You should try to make the song longer, add some melodies and such...
Still, its a pretty good try!

Amusing!

This made me laugh a bit. I haven't heard that song for like... ages.
I have to say, your rendition of this song is awesome, it's quite fun to listen to.
I feel the use of the low pass filter at the middle of the song is a bit obstructive, it just doesn't really fit.
Also, try to vary the instruments. There's no variation in the instruments or the melody, so this gets quite repetitive and boring really quickly.
Great song though! =D

Maknib responds:

Thanks for the review.. i know it's a bit repetative but i really only wanted it to be a short quick rendition. i sort of like the low pass filter, to me it gives the effect of migration into a dance song and different rhythm (if you are talking about just as the first pattern finishes)

but thanks for the tips i'll remember them form when i do..hm.. Puff the magic dragon remix :P

A bit weird..

I find the instruments a bit weird and off timing, but despite it, it still has a great beat.
IMO, I feel this song can have a bit more bass. That's in my opinion. =)
This is still pretty good, though, Hope your future songs will be better!

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

Actually check out my previous songs. their good too. lol. Most of them are probably better. The instrumments are actually an Alto Saxaphone, a guitar, clap, hat, tom, and electric guitar. The Alto Sax had an Arpeggio. Basically toying with the pitch. The Electric Guitar also was done doing the same thing.

Congrats!

I do have to be happy for you that your song finally got approved after a length long wait..
But I do have to say this sing is a tad annoying, with the high pitch synth a bit too high.
Thanks for crediting me! :)

madhoe responds:

Peek-a-boo.

Nice!

I find it a bit repetitive.
Try to make an original chord progression, rather than just one of those 4 chord progressions that repeat itself.
Did you remove the limiter on the master channel? It seems to be ruining the song.
Still, its great. Maybe you'd want to add a melody tho this song?

yaboss responds:

It was just a test but i will try to do what you say. Thanks for the review^^.

Pretty good..

This is a pretty neat song, but I do have to say, there's still quite a lot you can improve on.
firstly, this doesn't really sound like drum and bass. I'm just saying.
Also, it seems you made the kick drum so loud there is some clipping. You may wasn't to experiment with compressors and limiters to keep it punchy yet not clip.
Still, great track, rated it a 5 so it gets a score close to what it deserves.

Great!

This is one great song.
You're new to music making? This is just awesome! Can't believe someone new to this can make something this good.
Great work!

Thomas-Orre responds:

I've tried to learn as much as possible before starting making music on computer, especially about mastering. But I probably still need to progress a lot...
Anyways, thanks a lot for the first review !

Learning musician and animator. Go check out my music!

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