Repetitive?
Its just a wow-ow-ow sound playing again and again.
Does not really interest me, even though it is a loop.
Maybe you should try to add some other melodies to it, the progression itself is decent. Some melodies will really enhance this song.
Thank you for your input and opinion, I have created what I have wanted however, And it's not just simply an wow-ow-ow ;), Love filter with automation combined with a layer of sytrus and 3xosc with automation aswell.
Other than that, Pretty simple, And spent about 15 minutes on it, But I am content.
(But your review is not useless, Have no fear)
Oh my god...
You seriously already have a fan club.. such a high vote.
But really, this song is great. It's as though a dj had mixed some of your songs together, but better. I mean, the melodies smoothly flow from one song to another.
Love this song. It's impossible not to favourite and song that has melodies of many songs on already like.
I notice mixing is a bit off. Some instruments are too soft. You should mix while your ears are fresh, take a break before mixing. But you're going to fix that, aren't you?
Wooo! Go azurevixen and f-777! Two awesome artists = one hell of a good song! Great job!
Faved, 5/5 10/10 and downloaded. (Do tell me when you upload a better version, i will redownload it.)
Thanks :P and yeah the 320 kbps one will sound much much more clear. I'll have it within a day :D
Hmm..
Great tune. I can tell it will make a great song once it's done.
It has a great progression..
The main sawtooth pluck got a bit annoying, for it was replaying the same melody again and again.
Honestly, this was a bit overcompressed, I'd rather listen to a song that is at a lower volume than one that one just tossed a compressor or a limiter on the master track.. But hey, this isn't finished yet, so maybe you'll finish it up.
9/10, 5/5.
One star less because of the the fact that it isn't finished yet.. And maybe because it was too repetitive.
Will look out for the finished version.. =D
I totaly agree with the fact that its too repetitive. I had just noticed that major issue right after rendering it. Its way more epic now that ive changed that.
Fixed it!
Beat-y..
Love the way you created a really nice beat to this song. Really sounds happy..
The kick could be a bit more punchier.. I think I can hardly hear it.
There seems to be massive clipping at certain parts, I'm not sure if you did it on purpose..
I really like the melody, but there's nothing much unique about this. It seems like just another newgrounds song, due to the use of a really common chord progression (I always say if one wants to use that, make the song sound more unique)
Overall, great beat. At least I have something good I can dance to. =D
*Aw man.. I can't stop being critical.. o.o This song is actually very good.. I just suck at saying it. *
hahaha :) I aprecciate the time you took to make a good review and I like constructive critics, so really thanks! ;)
Great song!!
Distortion? Don't really hear any. I think it's the limiter on the master track.
I just love the pads you started the song with..
At 1.25, I think you should really split instruments up. Don't put too similar sounding instruments together, and eq off the bass of high pitched instruments, and the treble of low pitched instruments.
And this song could do a melody. The beginning is a bit boring, but maybe that's just the buildup.
Anyway, good song you got there. Love it..
thanks dude for the great review!
:D
Absolutely beautiful..
I think I've heard the original before, it was a seriously long time ago.
This is an awesome version of this song, I like the way you totally changed it to trance.
The beat is great, like how it makes me want to get up and dance..
I just feel this song could have some extra high end, all the instruments seem to be crowding at the low mid section, which really muddles up the sound. Some higher pitched instruments will work well, such as strings or sawtooth-based synths..
But meh, that's just personal preference.
Still, great job!
Great review!
and thank you very much sir!
:)
-chimy727/Dj-Greene.
Nature?
The nature sounds at the beginning was a nice touch. I just find the repeated bird tweeting annoying. o.o
The song itself is a bit simple, in terms of instruments. I'm just hearing the same saw pluck and kick drums playing again from the beginning to the end. You should use varied instruments, the song got kind of boring after a while. Maybe some pads in the background will help, or playing the melody with another synth.
Overall, it is decent. The melodies, although simple, do help give this song some action, and the kick is sufficiently 'punchy' enough. (Maybe too punchy o.o)
Just looking at your other songs... =)
This is excellent.. You make really good ambient- style music. You've added so many of the small details in the music, yet the whole song still keeps its structure.. Now that's really good.
I notice your songs revolve around a chord progression of two chords. That sounds great. Like the effect the progression gives to the song.
Once again, the limiter on the song is kind of ruining it, making it hard to listen to. You should try to reduce the volume of some of the instruments.
Still, this is great. Really like this song.
Great melody..
I like the chords you used, they are great. I just find one part a bit repetitive.
The pads are great too, they sound nice and airy..
You've added every subtle effect, which really enhances the song by alot.\
This would make a great trance song beginning, if you added a nice beat to it..
Maybe you should raise the volume of the piano at the beginning, it was drowned out by the strings.
Also, I can hear a limiter on the song. It kind of spoils the song as everytime the kick drum sounds, the rest of the song seems to duck away.. You should try to limit the kick drum itself, or use less heavy pads. They seem to be competing with each other for volume.
Overall, great song. The mixing and mastering aren't perfect, but the song itself is great.
Oh, and I think this would fit the ambient genre better. =)
thanks man yeah im new at the whole mixing thing but im sure i will get there:) thankx alot man if you like trance check out buddy project xero
Reallly calming.
I really like the way this song just makes me relax. I just have to say the one you made was a bit repetitive, and there was little variation between parts.
But hey, this will do very well in a flash game menu, where problems like repetitiveness aren't a problem.
Decent loop..
Yeah, I gotta fix that. I think if I work on it again, I'll take another sample from the song with some vocals and vary it that way.
Anyway, thanks. ^^
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