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I like the electric guitars, just that this genre isn't really my type.
I feel for this genre, the vocals could be much harsher. Your singing is well, a bit too mellow for this genre.
The vocals could also be a bit louder...
I dig the rock beats. Really great.
yes its still a bit scary the singing, but il work on it thanks ;) !
Decent..
What makes this song shine is the melodies you put. Although it's a rather common progression, the melodies you put make the song so much better..
Fl studio presets? I use them too.. Just that I avoid the rather bad sounding ones, such as the string melody you put at the beginning and the FL Slayer.
Great song, btw!
i didn't use slayer
Great song!
I like how this creates a calming mood, it really is great to listen to when one is feeling down.
The melodies are great, I just think the fading in and out via (i think) an LFO wasn't necessary.
This seriously has potential. Finish it, and I think it will be awesome!
Decent?
Honestly, the vocals in the beginning were unnecessary. Most people here just love to get into the best part, not listen to some really long intro that most people would just drop a zero when they get bored of it.
The beats you used are kickass. They really rock. Honestly, this should be put in the DnB genre, not ambient.
Kind of like this song. That is, after the intro. The panning effects weren't necessary either, but that's just taste.
Great song!
Merci!
I can agree that to the most the intro is somewhat unneccesary ; )
I would like to go deep here as in explaining myself as an artist and what is to me to make a music and why, but i would rather debate it over IRL. ; )
Sincere thanks for the comment!
5 days late...
Yep. This came late.
I like the background synth effects you used, they add a spooky feeling to this song.
The melodies you used also help depict a really "halloween"ish mood. Not too happy, not too sad and somewhat spooky.
Honestly, you could have made the synths more airy and distant, possibly by adding some heavy reverb. Some ambience wouldn't hurt too.
Still, this is a pretty decent tune. Like the mood this gives. Especially since it's night right now. *shivers*
Thank you, i shall experiment more with the reverb...
Hmm..
I like the tunes you put into this song, they kind of fit.
Just that you used a (rather) common chord progression, I don't recommend you emphasize it, rather, work on letting your melodies do the work.
This song could do better mixing, certain instruments' volumes are too off.
And the pads at the beginning could sound more stereo. Try duplicating that channel, pan each one to the far left and right, and detune one side ever so slightly. Insta-stereo effect. =)
Still, great song. This song can be improved a lot by better mixing.
Great song!
I like the vocals, the instruments are great too.
The melodies you used are good.
I just find you overdid the bass, the volume of it is a bit too loud. It seems to take over the whole song, when I'm listening on my headphones.
Still, this is a great song. Great job!
Great tune.
Honestly, i don't really call this zero bombed, unless you saw the score drop by itself. I doubt too many people will 5 vote this.
This tune is great, creates a fun Halloween song.
I just feel there is some problems. Maybe you should use a more consistent beat with this song.
Good songs have frequencies that go throughout all ranges. This song lacks a solid low mid and bass.
Lastly, remove the limiter on the master track. It's ruining the song.
Oh well. I still like the melody anyway. :)
Sad?
I can feel some expression in this song. It does convey some form of sadness. I just find the piano did not become too dramatic. Make use of the piano's wide dynamic range and pitch! Utilize it to add drama to your piece, like pressing loud, low notes at really sad parts, or the twinkly highs for special effects.
The playing wasn't consistent though, I can tell you your playing isn't totally refined. I think this is related to the rather fast tempo you used. This would sound much better if it were slower, much more emotions will go through.
Overall, i like this song. Great piano solo.
This was a freestyle piece, basically played the piano as I went. If i was to actually compose a piece it would have these elements. Thanks a lot :D
Peace
Hmm.
This song is pretty decent.
Melody wise, i like the melody you used. Does seem to fit.
The drum rhythms are great too.
I notice the mixing is a bit off. The main lead is a bit too loud. It seems separate from the rest of the song, and does not blend in with the other instruments. This gives me the impression that you just used drum loops instead of creating it yourself.
Overall, great song. And be sure to edit the volume of the main synth before you use it in the game.
Will do thanks a lot :)
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Insane for you (first vocals) 