Great song!
This song is good, I never really heard the original, but this is nice.
There seems to be something missing from this song though, I think its some pads. To my taste, some pads will help this song sound much better.
Nah, just a suggestion. Also, some variety of instruments will work too.
The chord progression is too common, you see, so you should try something more interesting with the bassline, instead of repeating two notes again.
Still, this is a great song, and shows what you can do with music. =)